Hi I'm a senior in highschool about to turn in my apps.... what are some recommendations or tips you guys have to make sure our essays stand out and are ones admissions officers want to read. I'm worried my essays might be too much storytelling.
Hi there @shireenm12!
While your essays should have a hook and can definitely have a narrative quality, you also want to be mindful of the 350 word maximum. Prioritize the content that shows you in an active role and answers the prompt. You can find more tips here: https://blog.collegevine.com/how-to-write-the-university-of-california-essays-2022-2023/
And examples of essays here: https://blog.collegevine.com/university-of-california-essay-examples/
Hope this helps!
Best,
Priya
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