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Where can I find stellar college essay examples to guide my writing?

Feeling overwhelmed by the essay part of the app process. Does anyone know where I can find some really good college essay examples to help me figure out how to craft my own?

9 months ago

I completely understand how daunting the essay-writing process can seem. A great starting point for finding high-quality college essay examples is the websites of colleges themselves. Many universities publish a selection of essays from admitted students. For instance, Johns Hopkins University's 'Essays that Worked' series is a fantastic resource. You can also check out books like '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays' for more examples.

Another approach is to look at online platforms where students share their own successful college essays. Some educational consultants also compile books or posts with successful essays from former clients. But remember, these essays are meant to inspire you rather than to be copied in any way. Your essay should be incredibly personal to you. Think about an experience or a subject that you feel passionate about and use that as a starting point.

The most effective essays often focus on small, personal stories that illustrate who you are as an individual. Avoid broad or overly generic topics. If you're unsure about your draft, having a teacher, counselor, or mentor read it can be very helpful. They can provide feedback on how to strengthen your narrative and make your personal voice come through more clearly.

9 months ago

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