Looking for a diversity essay sample that snagged an admission spot?

Trying to craft a diversity essay that stands out. Anyone willing to share a sample or their experience with what made their essay successful?

I've seen many students struggle and subsequently succeed in writing their diversity essays. It's truly about capturing your unique experiences and perspective. While I can't share a specific sample due to confidentiality, one approach that worked for a student last year was focusing on a particular moment that illustrated their diverse background and how it influenced their perspective or actions in a significant way.

For example, the student chose to write about an event where they were the only representative of their culture at a school function. They discussed the feelings of isolation and otherness but turned the narrative around by creating a cultural exchange club following the event. This initiative did not just serve to educate others, but it also empowered the student, helping them grow in confidence and leadership.

This kind of approach, focusing on a specific event or idea, gives depth to your essay and allows admissions to see how your diversity has shaped you and could continue to benefit the college community. Don't be afraid to delve deep into the emotions and lessons learned.

If you want more examples, I would recommend checking out CollegeVine's blog as they have examples of dozens of successful essays with analysis, and I believe I've seen a post on well-written diversity essays.