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Tips for writing top-5 school essays

Hey everyone, I'm applying to some top-5 schools and I want to make sure my application essays are on point. Can anyone who's been through the process share some advice or tips on how to write a stellar essay for these top-tier schools?

9 months ago

I'd be happy to share some tips for writing excellent essays for top-tier schools!

1. Start early: Give yourself plenty of time to brainstorm, draft, and revise your essays. Starting early will allow you to explore different topics and ensure that your final essay is polished and well-written.

2. Be genuine and authentic: Colleges want to get to know who you are as a person, so it's important to stay true to yourself when writing your essays. Don't try to write what you think the admissions officers want to hear, as that will make your essay sound just like every other applicant's. Instead, focus on your own values, beliefs, and experiences.

3. Focus on a specific story or moment: Rather than trying to cover your entire life or several different experiences, choose a single, specific story or event for each prompt, to demonstrate an aspect of your personality, interests, or values in a targeted way. This approach will make your essay more engaging and easier to follow for the reader.

4. Show, don't tell: Instead of simply stating how you've grown or what you've learned, use vivid details, examples, and descriptions to illustrate your experience. This will help to paint a clearer picture in the reader's mind, which makes your essay more compelling.

5. Avoid cliches: Steer clear of overused topics (like sports victories or mission trips, along with those listed here: https://blog.collegevine.com/cliche-college-essay-topics) unless you have a truly unique angle. The more original your topic, the more it will stand out among the thousands of other essays received by the admissions committee.

6. Reflect on what you've learned: A strong essay will not only tell a story but also convey what the experience taught you and how it informed your perspective or shaped your character. Make sure to include your self-reflection and personal growth in your essay, so that admissions officers understand why this story matters for understanding who you'll be as a college student.

7. Edit, revise, and proofread: Don't underestimate the importance of editing your essay. Take the time to revise your work for clarity, sentence structure, and flow, and ask others (teachers, counselors, or friends) to review it too. A sloppy essay may give admissions officers the impression you don't care, so make sure you haven't missed any silly errors. If you want to get a more objective set of eyes on your essay from someone who doesn't already know you, check out CollegeVine's free peer essay review service, or the paid service offered by expert college admissions advisors.

8. Check out CollegeVine's essay guides: CollegeVine offers detailed breakdowns of the supplemental essay prompts of the top colleges in the country. You can find the one for Harvard, for example, here: https://blog.collegevine.com/how-to-write-the-harvard-university-essays/.

Remember, the quality of your essay can make a significant difference in your application to these schools where applicant are separated by such slim margins, so spend the time necessary to craft a thoughtful, well-written piece. Good luck!

9 months ago

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