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Yale 'Why us' essay help?

I'm a prospective Yale applicant and I'm currently brainstorming ideas for my 'Why us' essay. If you've been accepted to Yale, can you please share some advice or tips on what aspects of the university to focus on and how you've demonstrated your fit? Thank you!

a year ago

It's important to make your 'Why us' essay for Yale reflective of your authentic interests and experiences. Here are a few tips:

1. Research Yale's academic offerings and courses: Look into specific classes or majors that interest you and explain how you would benefit from these academic opportunities at Yale. Perhaps there's a unique course or a professor whose research aligns with your interests. Make sure you go beyond name-dropping these resources and explicitly explain why you are drawn to them (based on past experiences, interests, etc) and how they will benefit you in your future.

2. Extracurricular activities: Explore Yale's clubs, organizations, and opportunities outside of the classroom that align with your passions. Be specific about which groups you're particularly excited to join, and how they will allow you to continue pursuing your interests or develop new skills.

3. Campus community and culture: Yale has a strong sense of community, partly due to its residential college system. Reflect on the aspects of this system or other aspects of campus life that appeal to you and how you envision yourself contributing to that environment. Are there traditions or events that excite you? Explain why Yale's campus culture is a good fit for you.

4. Personal connection and experiences: If you've connected with current students or alumni, visited campus, or attended any Yale-related events, discuss these experiences and mention any specific interactions or moments that made you feel like Yale was the right choice for you. It helps create a genuine connection between you and the university.

5. Focus on your "spike" or highly-developed specialty: Yale, like many top schools, values students with a strong and deep passion in a particular area. Connect your skills and achievements in this specific field to resources, opportunities, and the community at Yale. Explain how you can contribute to and benefit from Yale's resources in your area of expertise.

Remember, it's crucial that your essay demonstrates your personality and genuine connection to Yale. Be specific, use personal anecdotes when possible, and avoid cliches or generic statements. Your 'Why us' essay should showcase your sincere enthusiasm for the school, supported by the research you've done and the experiences you've had. Best of luck!

a year ago

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