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What makes an excellent college essay?

Hey guys, I'm starting to work on my college applications and want to make sure I'm doing everything I can. What are some tips or strategies to write an excellent college essay? Can you share examples of particularly memorable essays you've come across?

9 months ago

Hello! Crafting an excellent college essay takes some time, thought, and effort, but I'm glad you're seeking advice on how to approach it. Here are a few tips for creating a strong, memorable essay:

1. The most important aspect of your essay is that it accurately reflects who you are. Don't try to be someone you're not or only write what you think the admissions officers want to hear.

2. Use concrete examples, anecdotes, and experiences to illustrate your essay's main points. This will enrich your essay and create a vivid impression for the reader.

3. Common topics might not help you stand out. Instead of writing about clichés like sports victories or challenges with a new language, try diving deeper into your unique experiences or aspects of your personality.

4. Your essay should have a central idea that ties everything together. It's better to choose a specific experience, theme, or conflict and delve into it in-depth, rather than attempting to cover too much ground in a short essay.

5. The first draft of your essay is just the beginning. Don't be afraid to rewrite your essay multiple times and ask others for feedback to ensure your essay is clear, well-organized, and free of errors.

As for examples of memorable essays, they will ultimately depend on the context and personal experiences of the writer. Some examples include:

- A student writing about a moment when they had to make a difficult ethical decision related to their family business and how it transformed their understanding of integrity.

- A student recounting a single conversation with a stranger at a bus stop that altered their perspective on empathy, leading them to volunteer at a homeless shelter.

- An applicant discussing how their passion for baking led to the creation of a successful online blog, allowing them to connect with others and share valuable recipes and techniques.

Remember, your essay should be personal and unique to you, so don't be afraid to take risks and share your genuine voice. Good luck with the writing process!

9 months ago

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