UPenn essays that worked?

Hey applyingtocollege fam! I'm applying to UPenn and I'm really sweating about the essays. Anyone got any advice or examples of essays that worked at UPenn? I'm desperate for inspiration!

Hello! It's important to remember that successful essays should be personal, highlighting your own experiences and perspectives. So, while you can definitely look to others' essays for inspiration, don't feel that you need to, or even should, attempt to replicate their strategy.

That being said, you can find several strong UPenn essay examples on CollegeVine's blog: https://blog.collegevine.com/upenn-essay-examples/. The blog also has a breakdown of each of UPenn's prompts this year, to help you brainstorm how to write your own strong response: https://blog.collegevine.com/how-to-write-the-upenn-supplemental-essays.

Overall, when working on the supplemental essays for UPenn, consider these tips:

1. Research the unique programs and resources that UPenn has to offer. This will allow you to display your genuine interest in the university and write about how you'll take advantage of these opportunities. For example, you may write about the interdisciplinary nature of the Huntsman Program or the research opportunities in Wharton, depending on what aligns with your goals.

2. Make your essay personal and showcase your authentic voice. Avoid generic statements like "UPenn has a beautiful campus." Instead, highlight a particular connection you have with UPenn or how you can contribute to the campus community.

3. Address your interest in your chosen major or program in the "Why Major?" supplement. Explain why you're passionate about that subject and how studying it at UPenn aligns with your long-term goals. If you're undecided, discuss the various subjects you may be interested in exploring and how UPenn provides the perfect environment for your exploration.

4. Proofread your essay carefully and make sure it aligns with UPenn's mission and values. Ask a trusted teacher, counselor, or friend to review your essay and provide feedback. If you don't know where to turn, remember that CollegeVine offers both a free peer essay review service and paid reviews from expert college admissions advisors.

Ultimately, your essay should showcase your personality, values, and aspirations while demonstrating your genuine interest in UPenn specifically. Focus on aspects of the university that align with your goals and show how you can contribute to the campus community. Good luck with your application!