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Can anyone share some successful Common App essay examples?

Hey guys, I'm struggling with my Common App essay and need some inspiration. Have you seen any good examples that worked for other students? Are there any websites or resources where I can find such samples? Thanks in advance!

8 months ago

Sure! There are quite a few websites that have examples of successful Common App essays. Some of these resources include CollegeVine's Essay Breakdowns and The College Essay Guy. Remember to use these examples only for inspiration and try not to copy their style or content.

It's important to keep in mind that what works for one student may not necessarily work for another. The best approach is to tell a unique story that represents your perspective and draws on your personal experiences. A compelling essay typically has the following qualities:

1. A strong narrative: A focus on storytelling, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

2. Authenticity: Your voice should come through, reflecting your personality and experiences.

3. Clear Purpose: Showcase what you've learned, how you've grown, or demonstrate your passion for a particular subject/field.

4. Specific details: Use concrete examples and vivid descriptions to create a clear image for your reader.

5. Well-crafted language: Use varied sentence structure and avoid overly complex vocabulary.

As you work on your essay, focus on showing, rather than telling, and use anecdotes and experiences to convey your message. This will create a more engaging and memorable essay. Good luck with your writing!

To learn more about successful essays, read this blog post: https://blog.collegevine.com/common-app-essay-examples/

8 months ago

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