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How do I know if my college essay is too personal or controversial?

I've written a college essay about a sensitive and potentially controversial topic, but I think it truly reflects my values and experiences. How can I tell if it's too risky or inappropriate to submit, and what are some guidelines for sharing personal stories without crossing any lines?

a year ago

It's great that you're considering the potential impact of your essay topic! A well-written personal essay can make a difference in the college admissions process. It's important to share your genuine experiences and values, but it's also wise to be cautious about crossing any lines.

First, consider the specific topic you're discussing and whether it may offend or alienate the reader. You want to connect with your audience, not push them away. Next, think about the tone and language you're using. Aim for a respectful, thoughtful approach.

Also, try seeking feedback from a trusted adult or mentor. They may have valuable insight on how your essay could be perceived and if any changes should be made. If you're unsure about a particular section or line, it's always a good idea to err on the side of caution.

a year ago

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