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How to approach writing a college essay as a first-generation immigrant?

Hey everyone, as a first-generation immigrant, I wanted to share my unique experiences in my college essay. However, I'm not sure how to approach it without sounding cliché or like I'm complaining. Any advice or tips from fellow immigrants who have written successful essays would be greatly appreciated!

a year ago

Hey! As a parent of a first-generation immigrant who has gone through the college admissions process, I can share some tips that worked for my child. When writing your college essay, focus on the positive aspects of your journey and the lessons you've learned from your experiences.

Instead of sounding like you're complaining, discuss how your background has shaped your perspective and contributed to your personal growth. For example, you could write about how your experiences have made you more resilient or adaptable to new situations.

It's also important to make your story unique and personal. Avoid generalizations and clichés by diving deep into specific moments, feelings, or events that have had a significant impact on your life. Providing vivid descriptions and reflecting on these experiences will help your essay stand out from the rest.

Lastly, don't forget to proofread your essay and ask for feedback from trusted friends, teachers, or counselors. Good luck with your college essay and the admissions process!

a year ago

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