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What's a good way to start my college essay?

I'm feel like I'm struggling with the beginning of my essay. I want to draw the reader in and make a strong first impression. Any tips on how to start my college essay? Thanks for any help!

11 months ago

Hi there! A strong start to your college essay is crucial to catch the reader's attention, so it's good you're thinking carefully about how to craft one. One tip is to start with an engaging anecdote or personal story that relates to the main theme of your essay. It can be a specific incident or a vivid memory that can set the stage for the story you're about to tell.

Another approach is to begin with a thought-provoking question, quote, or bold statement that aligns with your essay's topic. This can catch the reader's attention right away and motivate them to continue reading.

If you're unsure whether your introduction works, remember that CollegeVine offers both free, peer essay reviews, and paid reviews by our team of experts. Both of these resources can help you double-check whether what you're trying to convey is coming across.

Good luck with your introduction!

11 months ago

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