So I've drafted my college app essay but I'm stumped on the conclusion. I want to end in a way that feels natural and rounds off my essay well, not just stopping abruptly or sounding too cheesy. What strategies do you recommend?
I'm glad to hear you've completed your draft and are focusing on crafting a strong conclusion. It's a crucial part of the essay, as it's your last chance to leave a memorable impression on the admissions committee. A successful strategy is to circle back to the hook you used in your introduction; this can provide a satisfying sense of closure. Additionally, you can project forward, considering how the experiences you've discussed will influence you at college and beyond. Think about the themes or values you highlighted in your essay and reiterate them in a way that underscores your development.
For example, if your essay is about a problem-solving experience, you could end by reflecting on how that experience will shape your approach to challenges in the future. Try to avoid clichés or overly grand statements about changing the world. Instead, focus on personal growth and realistic aspirations. A little humility can be just as compelling as confidence. You might also connect your conclusion back to the specific college or program, explaining how you see their values or opportunities aligning with your goals. Remember, the admissions officers are looking for students who will contribute to their community in meaningful ways.
Lastly, after you think you've got a solid conclusion, step away for a day or two, then read your essay from start to finish to ensure the tone is consistent and your conclusion feels integrated with the rest of your narrative. Good luck!
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