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Using dialogue in college essays - does it work?

How do you guys feel about including dialogue in college essays? Does it add to the narrative, or is it just taking up valuable space? Anyone had success with this approach?

a year ago

Hey there! From my experience with my kid's application process, including dialogue in the college essays can definitely work when done correctly. It can bring stories to life and create a connection with the reader. Remember, admissions officers are reading through heaps of essays, so a bit of well-written dialogue can make your piece stand out. However, the key is to use it sparingly and ensure it's impactful. My child used a short dialogue to illustrate a defining moment in her essay, and it seemed to resonate well with the admissions committee—I believe it was a contributing factor in her acceptance. Just be sure that every line of dialogue serves a purpose in demonstrating something significant about you or your perspective. It should add to the narrative, not distract from it. Good luck with your essay!

a year ago

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