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Is 'innocence' too vague of a theme for a college essay?

I'm thinking of writing about the concept of innocence and experiences related to it as my essay topic. I'm just not sure if this theme is too abstract or if it could resonate well with the college admissions team. Any opinions?

a year ago

'Innocence' can serve as a compelling theme for your college essay, as long as you are able to ground it in concrete experiences and personal growth. Remember, the essay is an opportunity for admissions officers to get to know you beyond your grades and test scores.

The key is to ensure that your essay includes specific anecdotes and reflections that make the theme of innocence personal and revealing about who you are. Make sure to close the loop by connecting back to how these experiences have shaped your outlook and prepared you for college. If you can do that, you'll have a winning essay on your hands. Good luck!

a year ago

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