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I have a question about my Essay
I used the peer review tab and they suggest that I introduce paragraph breaks, can someone explain this in more detail and explain when I should use the breaks.
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• 3 years ago
Basically, I think they want you to make it where your reader can anticipate the change in topic from paragraph to paragraph, so during the end of your first body paragraph, you should introduce the topic of the second body paragraph. Does that make sense?
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Should it introduce the next topic at the beginning of the paragraph?