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NHS Essay

Would someone be able to edit my NHS essay

the prompt is Consider a leadership position you’ve held, in the school or in the community. Briefly describe the position and the responsibilities of the position. Explain, in detail, how that leadership position and your execution of that leadership position demonstrate exemplary leadership as defined by the NHS Leadership Criteria.and the rubric says for a well qualified canidate that it helps the faculty paint a picture of who you are and has no grammatical erros.

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2 years ago[edited]

Hi @Swayam_Jain17

You have 2 options on Collegevine.

You can either use the paid essay review. This means you choose from expert reviewers and pay their rate. $20 for a quick review to $125 for a full review.

https://www.collegevine.com/experts/essay-review

Or you can use a peer review which is a review by other non-experts who are high school students. So this means you do not get to choose who looks at your essay or who reviews it. The output ranges widely from not helpful to extremely helpful.

https://www.collegevine.com/essays/review

Good luck.

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2 years ago

Hello!

Maybe you should use peer essay review for a free essay review instead of making a post asking for an essay review. You can also buy an essay review from a professional in collegevine.

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