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I was wondering if you would be willing to take a look at my Common App Activties and tell me what you think at first impression. If you think I show leadership, commitment, and accomplishment, on there.
1. Football( Led JV/Freshman team during games, ran practices, motivated team to win, and promoted positive attitude. Varsity Athlete 11th and 12th grades)
Hrs a Week: 8
Weeks per year: 44
Participation: 9,10,11,12
2. Ultimate Frisbee (Initially was Vice President of the Club;Helped get a professional team at Stargate; Served as Captain of team; Ran team social media accounts)
Hrs a Week: 5
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
3. Knowledge Bowl(Won 3A State and Regional Tournament all 4 years of high school. Placed 2nd in national tournament all 4 years of high school. Secretary 11-12th grade)
Hrs a Week: 3
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
4. FBLA(Won 1st place in District Website Design Competition. 5th place in Coding and Programming at State competition. Helped Organize and Plan Fundraisers)
Hrs a Week: 3
Weeks per year: 40
Participation: 11,12
5. Job(Worked as Food runner; Ran trays of food to bays in the venue, expedited in kitchen
Hrs a Week: 6
Weeks per year: 42
Participation: 10,11,12
6. Volunteer(Organized clothes, sorted clothes for children in need. Organized Resource Center with food, clothes, and supplies for customers in need)
Hrs a Week: 2.5
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
7. Ran a Blog(Ran Broncos Blog with a friend, Posted content 2 times a week about Denver Broncos, have made over 100 posts, posted 35,000 words)
Hrs a Week: 1.5
Weeks per year: 30
Participation:11,12
8. Coded Video games( Coded video games with friends in Python and JS. Coded 2 games published online with 500 plays. )
Hrs a Week: 2
Weeks per year: 20
Participation: 11,12
9. Football(Helped Peer Tutor Kids before school in Math, History, and Science; Participated in Fundraisers; Collaborated with other members)
Hrs a Week: 2
Weeks per year: 32
Participation: 10,11,12
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Hey there @Swayam_Jain17!
Everything looks great-- you seem very dedicated! You have a great variety of clubs, sports, community service, awards, passion projects, and jobs. The only thing I can think of is that you might want to reorder based on importance-- I would put the blog under coding a video game and maybe move your job a little higher up? Just a thought, everything looks really strong.
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